I Look Up
By onemorething
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Look up and the sky
has hung cumulus paintings
of spilled milk from stratus spools
of white silk fringed with sunlight.
Others are so vast they swallow birds
and planes alike, or spread themselves
as sheets of new paper that I might write
you a Dear John letter upon.
Later, they descend from galleries
to flatten their mood over fields: a menace
or a comfort. Or lifted to a better view, are splayed
as scales, backlit with blue ocean, of cirrocumulus.
Some have risen, concrete towers of grey
from the earth with the density of heartache,
but as the day darkens, they morph again,
wisped to more spectral waves of cirrus.
At midnight, in the absence of stars,
the moon elects to peer her glass eye through them.
When the air is thin, I part the atmosphere in drifts,
I look up
when I cannot look down.
Image is my own of the not very pink at all moon of a couple of nights ago.
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Not just me, then - I was
Not just me, then - I was peering at the sky and thinking, 'Pink? Have I got the right night?' Beautiful picture, though.
Just so much lovely description, and I can feel it soothing my ragged soul as I read. Also, greatly enjoying your book!
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I Look Up
Enjoyed, the last 3 lines are lovely. Can't get my head around these lines, though -
By midnight, respite in invisibility
bar the matt absence of stars
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wonderful! :
wonderful! :
"Some have risen, concrete towers of grey
from the earth with the density of heartache"
reminded me so strongly of a certain kind of sky
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As always so inspiring Rachel
As always so inspiring Rachel.
Jenny.
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I read this before and have
I read this before and have come back to it - I loved the descriptions of clouds. It gives you that timeless feeling of lying back watching the clouds go past and you've captured their different characters beautifully. Great ending again!
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