Starfish to Flint
By littleditty
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to Swiss army knife,
took a very long time.
I would never find the geology
(of you and me.)
I like to go back to rock
to feel something weighty;
fossil, shell or crystal treasure
for my knapsack, torch, and map:
jammed, always on the return,
it’s April 1980.
Bus. Bell. The long walk back.
I had unlocked co-ordinates;
handed guidebooks to time travellers,
burnt charts on bonfires to make stars to see by.
I’d waited for a better signal
at the intersection. All in vain.
It was a matter of precipitation –
the complicated falling of rain.
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Thought this was really
Thought this was really pretty. Loved 'burnt maps on bonfires to make stars to see by'. beautiful words
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This is so lovely. Perfectly
This is so lovely. Perfectly conjured up the evolutionary going forward in time and backwards to memory. Loved it. Agreed - many beautiful words. Rachel :)
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I thought the analogy of flint to Swiss knife encompassed
the meaning of evolution very completely. Kind of like 'nuff said,' which is rather in the way you referred to your relationship. Happy or sad we are left wondering, but we know enough.
Very nice.
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