Captain Toad and Fat Mary
By littleditty
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Mr Toad in his green, narrow boat
rode the River lanes as if on broken horseback.
Super Trouper searchlight streams
a film from long ago - the Cut,
canoe - a fire (and a madman
looking for another madman) port side;
engine purrs, dogs awaken,
‘Alarum! Alarum!’ Not drowning, Toad,
just woken - waving from the porthole
starboard side, Apocalypse mistaken.
When Toady's sober and the party's over
he'd take the tiller from here to Dover
(If rivers were less locks and longer)
instead he pootles up and down,
the Super Trouper beams 'til dawn.
Our Captain scans the banks for harm,
engine purrs...dogs howl
5AM 'Alarum!'
5/2020
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FNWsuzsXccY
Fat Mary was an ugly old trout
as old as Loch Ness and seen as often, less,
by the throng from here about.
Fishermen do not want her - they sail away, up anchor
when they discover she was born with teeth, a smile,
a humped back like a whale, surfacing
occasionally, singing Brahms.
Fat Mary was legendary. You could look and look
and never find her – and now, all these years later
if patient enough, and honest enough – quiet enough
brave enough, from a widescreen window
she will leap, thinking she’s a dolphin and landing like a bomb,
singing an Ode to a Hummingbird, caught in the beam of a Super Trouper
by Captain Toad’s green boat.
https://thesublimeblog.org/2019/03/06/ode-to-the-hummingbird-neruda/
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t894eGoymio Brahms lullaby
A crash of stumbling beer cans, a can of worms,
a peg leg, the scratch of an old 78 – and in the lullaby
under the water, Mary knew whisky
made Toad’s hate elongated, his verbs
barraging, thronging the slipstream.
Mary a bird? A wife, mother, chick, bomb, hen?
She bubbled – he’d been feeding the coots again!
Dear Mary, you never knew how to.
The others had if only you knew cinnamon sprinkled
on their Rice Crispies. Two doting parents,
an extended family network
of various species to tell you
you were cute coot. You are hungry,
You are angry.
Are you sad? Who are you?II am Hans Christian Anderson.” and he spits in his spittoon.
“Those stories are for grown-ups, Mary!'
Mary wrings the soft petalled top waters through her gills.
Until dusk, she was glad he was off balance.
Ancient fish need time, an underbelly the patina of
experience, twirling the flotsam petals
side-stroking the blind. Toad would cruise
for water when the moon was blue
and Mary must catch a ride.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8eJiZutTZMk
Moving on song. Go Move Shift
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ELeZmPDdFPE
Cover your eyes
5/2020
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This poem is nostalgic and
This poem is nostalgic and full of childhood memories of Tales Of The River Bank, although there wasn't a toad in this childrens tv programme. But I do remember watching Toad Of Toad Hall and his adventures on the river, He was such a sprightly character and I just loved his adventures.
I don't think I'll ever grow up and feel quite wistful for those fond memorable stories.
I enjoyed your poem.
Jenny.
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I like your idea of Mr Toad
I like your idea of Mr Toad riding the river. It made me think about broken horseback, as if he is one of the four horseman. Quite dramatic for short piece, and I like the complexity of it too. It would be nice to wake up and find it was all a dream.
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I don't think you've said
I don't think you've said enough! You have definitely piqued my interest anyway. I will look forward to more toadiness then from your Apocalapse Now PTSD toad!
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spring is like a perhaps hand
Don't know about all of this but I'm a big fan of ee cummings and I really like your poem a lot.
& Nolan
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etcetera
Good idea! Cummings is very refreshing he is really original and quite unique &
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I've drifted into Ted Hughes,
I've drifted into Ted Hughes, setting aside some postmodern criticisms and biographical bumps in the road. Your writing around nature has some great parallels with his. It just happens that I'm rediscovering an intimacy with those things that surround us and of which we are part. You've done this really well. The writing is full of little surprises and makes strange in a captivating way. Keep mining.
He said, sitting in his greenhouse that might take off at any moment.
Parson Thru
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I didn't realise you had
I didn't realise you had added to it until I read Parson's comment and looked up! It's so wonderful and magical now that I don't want to know exactly what it's about, just loving all the words and images and links that you've added and reading again to catch something else. Some brilliant lines in these that it's hard to pick a few, but 'Mary knew whisky made Toad’s hate elongated' and 'Ancient fish need time, an underbelly the patina of experience' are a couple of my favourites. Rachel :)
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Yes I saw, sounds fantastic,
Yes I saw, sounds fantastic, will look forward to reading it. :)
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Can't wait! You're brimming
Can't wait! You're brimming with enthusiasm. A good sign.
Pegging it down? Are you kidding? I've got my toothbrush and passport in here.
Parson Thru
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