bags of bones
By Coolhermit
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bags of bones in parchment skin
he is bald, she wears a wig
to cover chemo ravaging
the wheelchair rattles market cobbles
earth spills from hardy annuals
badly balanced on her lap
‘watch out! that lorry!’
‘I ain’t blind yet, mother’
(new corneas are long overdue)
‘careful! mind the kerb!
you’re spilling me morning glories
I always said you’ll be the death of me’
‘remember when we went walking
the year before you had our Jack?’
‘Jack? I don't know any Jacks’
‘you said the hills looked blue steel grey’
‘blue, steel, grey,... hills you say?’
‘you wanted to paint them… ‘
‘paint hills? I never painted hills... '
‘you couldn't… we never went back... you had our Jack’
‘Jack?’
‘he went away… a while ago…’
a tear welled and trickled the corrugate skin
channelling from cheek to dimpled chin
‘Jack! so smart in his uniform, is he coming back?
the old man wipes his eyes,
‘any day, mother, any day…’
‘I’ll bake him a Victoria sponge’
‘he’ll love that, mother’
‘is he coming for his tea?’
‘he’ll be home soon.’
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Lovingly told with empathy –
Lovingly told with empathy – based on a real incident, or combining encounters? Rhiannon
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I don't know if I'm allowed
I don't know if I'm allowed my brother said the other day they'd said on y=the radio Jaggers band was now "The strolling bones ! "
Cheers Hermit well done, but also a bit insensitive. Well yes, getting there hey?
Tom Brown
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