The Death of a Star
By onemorething
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Whales have to believe in something;
the refuge of faith ever more persuasive,
when as a group, you find you're in decline,
and in nightly gazes heavenward,
their gigantic masses break the surface
of an ocean to see the silvered orbs nictate,
guessing that they must be the eyes
of a thousand other whales fluttering
back at them from another distant deep.
And these visions feed the fire of their doctrines,
fuel the motion of each elephantine anatomy:
a blue whale's heart, for instance,
is enormous, gallons of blood impelled
on the necessity of just a slow beat
to follow these flickered lights
before they are engulfed by sunrise.
Whales do not understand that stars will shine
only for as long they have hydrogen to burn,
until a black hole draws them into its void -
it is as if they had never existed at all.
So when a whale feels the cold, gravitational waves
released across space, and time is punctured
with dark markers of new equations -
it is again the long sigh of an angry god
to a whale: the kind of audible groan that gave birth
to the first humans - a whale surmises,
though what they ever did to warrant such a punishment,
they cannot explain, yet still, they lament it
at depth - the way the sea is always taking things
that don't belong to it, how it keeps shifting
beneath the darkness, the watchful skies,
the psalms of thermonuclear fusion, the deaths, and
when we venture into a whale's water,
flinching, we know it.
Image is from pixabay.
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Really enjoyed the elemental
Really enjoyed the elemental feel of this.
I genuinely don't know how you keep control of that final stanza, but it's seriously impressive -- it reads like a wave, if that makes sense (probably not!). Anyway, nice one.
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No worries -- I think it
No worries -- I think it conveys this idea of there being a kind of beauty in how existence and suffering are intertwined. However, that could just be my mindset on a Monday morning before a 3-hour meeting.
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super whale poem,
your wonderings on the whale's wonderings - i wrote today and their spiralling feeding champagne bubbles appeared in a write ramble! You imagine amazing creatures - I imagine blue whales are the saddest of all - it's killer whales seem to have all the fun. I'll read this one again when I less fried - enjoyed.
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You have made the writing of
You have made the writing of nature and the elements - and related symbolism - your speciality, Rachel, and you do it superbly. This poem is no exception.
I have only a small query; shouldn't this line " the way the sea is always taking
things that doesn't belong to it" be "......that don't belong to it"?
Kind regards, Luigi x
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