A muddy f+++++g hill. Falklands Three.
By Mentalelf
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A muddy fucking hill. Falklands Three.
The hill.
Just up
the hill.
Need it.
Right flank
Cover for centre.
Ghurka’s on our
Left flank,
That’s good
They’re good.
Then advance
Fast and hard
Bound.
Don’t take
A round.
Fix bayonets
Shit
That means close.
Please no mines!
Please no mines!
Rounds buzzing
And cracking.
Fucking hell
Mate.
If I cop
It.
Hope its quick.
Me too.
Move forward
Want to go
Backward.
Light order.
Weapons and
Ammo.
And water.
First platoon
First.
Second platoon
Move through.
Third platoon reserve.
Lucky bastards.
Off!
First platoon
Up the hill.
Tracer buzzing
Twenty meters…
Down for cover.
Second platoon us!
Run scared towards…
Past first platoon,
ten more yards
Search for dead ground.
Cover!
There is none.
If someone goes down
Keep going.
Orders.
Training.
Dive to the ground!
Start laying down
Rounds, cover,
Suppression,
For one platoon.
Glimpse man fall
Doesn’t get up.
No more fear
Adrenalin massive
Shouting, get up.
Run through first.
Ten yards.
Cover again,
Dead ground.
Apt name
Start looking for
Targets.
Can’t see.
That’s good.
If I can’t see them
Maybe they can’t
See me!
Spot young conscript
Being stupid.
Keeps popping up
Regular fashion.
Fires his rounds then ducks
Back down.
I just aim at the spot
up he comes
One round!
No more ducking!
Shouting, yelling.
Up again bound through
First platoon,
Ten yards more.
Down!
Second platoon
Nearly there.
Spanish voices
Spanglish.
“Surrender”
Hear rounds.
No more shouts.
First up and
Into trenches
See man.
Two rounds
To chest
Down,
Have to step
on him
To move forward.
Grenades in fox holes.
Its beginning
to quiet, to slow down.
Slow motion, hands raised.
Yelling!
Get over fucking there!
Butts and barrels
in backs shoving.
Yelling. Pushing.
Some have washed lines
On their face.
Where tears have
cleaned away the dirt!
The relief of living.
The counting starts,
We’ve lost two!
They’ve lost twenty plus.
Radio call,
medivac.
Combat medics begin.
Its time
Ours go in body bags.
A heavy weight.
Theirs are laid in line
Peaceful in death.
Some faces
Contorted.
Orders given,
Pickets set.
Waiting for the chopper.
Suddenly someone laughs,
We all laugh,
Pat backs.
Seemed like a lifetime
Took ten minutes.
The adrenalin goes.
I need sleep.
Exhausted.
I handed the
death letter back.
Ready for the next fucking muddy hill!
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This is a great pick -
This is a great pick - congratulations - agree about the powerful imagery too. Mentalelf I am very sorry but we're going to have to do something about the title. It's got the right rating on it and everything, but the title goes on our front page and as such has to be U rated so I'm afraid it's going to have to be changed in whichever way you find least intrusive - either asterisks, or dropping the fucking - apologies!
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another fucking fuck of a
another fucking fuck of a fucking muddy hill. great poetry should be alive. this lives.
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