rainbow dreams

By Nolan

Fri, 19 Mar 2021
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darling around you and around let me whirl my ring of rhythm around you girl oh let me swiftly whirl a ring of rhythm girl let me let my ring of rhythm flow all around you
~ darling let me wrap my words around you swiftly let me run my words freely freely run my rhyme all around you girl swiftly run freely around you let me wrap my rhyme tightly tightly darling
~ oh let me give you hope darling let me bring you solace let me bring you comfort in the night let me freely flow flow my love around you gentle darling let me freely flow my love all around you
~ i bring you dreams and visions whispers in the night oh tender let me gently wrap my dreams warmly around you darling let me wrap you softly in a magic robe let me wrap you in a shroud of wonder tightly tightly in a rainbow robe tightly in your rainbow shroud of many magic colours

~ & ~

Certificate U
Poem
raining goodnights
Romance

Comments

Submitted by Nolan on

Darling around you &

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Let me wrap my dreams around you,

Sweet darling goodnight!

 

 

Submitted by Nolan on

miraculous beauty sleep tight & 

 

Submitted by lenchenelf on

I wondered, are you a musician?

Tell me to get stuffed, but I wondered, if you placed this piece on the page, annotated and spaced as you would like folk to "hear it"  through seeing (you already know the senses work together)  it might be more appreciated?

Best

Lx

 

Submitted by Nolan on

It would be nice yes, let me know if anyone is interested, and no, I am not a musician. But perhaps someone can litteraly make a "song and dance" of it!

Oh I see, well that is exactly my idea as is here, one line just flowing into next right through as basically "one sentence" and ecstatic. I have another I'm working on.

Nolan &

 

Submitted by Nolan on

The cistern contains, the fountain overflows -William Blake

 

Submitted by Nolan on

It's raining it's wonderful! Goodnight goodnight my love & my love goodnight!