Above Such Things

Cherry

By D Marie

Mon, 13 Dec 2021
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I lay on the grass
To look at the sky
And the sky looks back
While passing me by
And for every cloud
That drifts from sight
Another comes
To take its place
Another comes
To carry away
The cares that weigh me down.

Past and future concerns.
Clouds are above such things.

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Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

I really enjoyed this - loved the last line! Thank you D

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Glad you liked it Insert :)

 

Submitted by donignacio on

It's always great to read a poem with optimism. This one made me feel good, so thank you for that.

 

Submitted by D Marie on

Thanks donignacio.
It's good to know you enjoyed it ;)

 

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on

 

Expressive and descriptive way of seeing troubles come and go like clouds. Your poem says so much.

Jenny.

 

Submitted by Turlough on

Clouds always do the right thing ... well nearly always.

And they have no cares.

I enjoyed readying your poem very much.

Turlough