From My Back Porch
By Richard L. Provencher
Thu, 07 Jul 2022
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I can hear a world
with untamed emotions
of cars and
mail delivery vans
garbage trucks
& other sets of wheels-
Working folks finally home
children hollering
evening get-togethers
tires in motion
now mute-
a shame one has to wait
many years to retire
then sit quietly
at the back porch
alone and listen to the
clatter of life
among families
with
various adventures
on the menu.
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Hi Richard, I think it's the
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Hi Richard, I think it's the best feeling in the world to retire and be out of the rat race, enjoying watching the world go by. Even spending time alone with my thoughts and not worrying about having to be anywhere important.
Your poem describes exactly how I feel and retiring makes it all worthwhile.
Jenny.
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