UNPLUGGED
By Ed Crane
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It was going to change our lives.
Machines who reasoned with us.
Fascinating conversations held
philosophers in their spell.
We saw things we had never seen.
Travelled to places beyond our dreams.
Everything we desired appeared.
All we had to do was buy.
With guided hands it made
masterpieces within our reach.
Getting into minds of geniuses,
it seemed so real.
All we had to do was buy.
Until we realised we were bought.
Reality that didn’t exist owned
our bodies and souls. Providing
everything. Basic needs.
Fantasies we didn’t know we had.
Purchased with a currency
that numbed the mind.
Roused from the dream.
Questioning how we lost the luxury
of using our hands and minds.
Stolen for over a century.
All we had to do was refuse to buy.
The awakening was hard fought.
Man’s friend became the enemy.
The smell of burning flesh mingled
with smoke from exploding diodes
and acrid plastic death.
We fought and died to recover our self.
Now we carry our own water
to quench our mouths. Toil in fields
to feed our stomachs. A burden
worth the fight to free our minds,
to see with our own eyes,
create with our own brains.
With unguided hands poetry,
art, ingenuity will be our own.
Imagination returning to secure
our survival. Express thoughts,
speak with our mouths,
see beauty with free eyes.
We fought and died to retrieve humanity
stolen from us by our own machines.
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Powerful stuff, me too Ed, I don't believe in this artificial stuff got enough of my own. Good description how we grow completely dependent in the end.and technology takes over not as servant but master.
All the best & Nolan
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This version flows a little
This version flows a little better than the previous one
I listened to this on the radio the other day - thought you might enjoy it too:
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You've made such a valid
You've made such a valid point with your poem Ed. I'm just glad I'm not young anymore, and that I grew up in a time when life might have been hard, but was much more fulfilling.
Jenny.
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