Another World
By Richard L. Provencher
Tue, 05 Sep 2023
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It’s getting
dark down
and a fox sniffs
a picture of
stillness
a bear lurches
down the trail
both cubs glued
to her side
her breath like
a torch for
them to follow
foxes are about
owls on the move
& coyotes with
tummies rumbling.
Rabbit noses are
a-twitching tonight.
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Lovely! You draw the scene
Lovely! You draw the scene alive with its movement and smells. Rhiannon
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Wow! This is a wonderful
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Wow! This is a wonderful nature poem Richard. I love all that you convey.
Well deserved cherries too.
Jenny
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Happy birthday for September
Happy birthday for September 10th! Your writing continues to convey the wonder and excitement of a young person, but also the wisdom age has earned :0)
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So simple and yet so
So simple and yet so evocative - I like this very much. Happy Birthday to you!
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