Season of the Cool

By Richard L. Provencher

Sun, 22 Oct 2023
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Before the day

glows with favour

& my eyes begin

to show movement

the wind is

soft upon my face.

 

I can smell apples

from the tree

above me.

 

Tenting in the

Fall may be outrageous

yet adventurous

& full of being alive-

 

good morning... everyone.

 

 

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Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Nature is full of surprises Eh? & this poem is my creative presentation. -Richard LP

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

You smell the apples, but did one drop down on you?! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Thanks for the slap on the cheek, R. I cannot bring all my words to the left edge nor remove the blackened letters. Older age beginning to affect memory, but i still wish to write. Cheers. -R 

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Bit puzzled, Richard. Didn't mean any rebuke or criticism - or did you mean a joke about the apple 'slapping your cheek'?!  I was just amused because you pictured yourself under the apple tree, enjoying their smell, and talking about the 'fall' being  adventurous, and so wondered whether you had a bump suddenly from one descending.

I hadn't noticed the indents and the bold actually, or thought about it. It doesn't affect the verse.

Christian greeings, enjoy your memories and writing and fellowship, Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Hello Rhiannonw, so sorry for thinking you thought I had gone off the rails. Please forgive me. Hope you enjoy my latest. Chimo. -Richard LP

Richard L. Provencher

Submitted by Nolan on

"Before the day glows with favour" sounds wonderful Rixchard, you must show me one day! & Nolan

 

Submitted by Richard L. Prov... on

Accentuate the positive in a new poem whenever you feel down. Works for me. Chimo.

Richard L. Provencher