“This night I will …”

Gold cherry

By Rhiannonw

Sat, 30 Dec 2023
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19 comments
 

“I’ll stay awake
and keep so quiet
and see them bring
those things and fill
my stocking up …
I know they’ll wait until all’s quiet
and they think I’m sleeping, slow deep breathing …
and then I’ll bounce up, give them a shock
(or shall I just wait and look when they’ve gone?
not spoil their fun)…
now how to stay awake?
I’ll think up stories, or do some sums,
I’ll put a knobbly lorry under me in bed …
I’ll wriggle my toes, and do some exercises … …
where has the darkness gone –
and there’s a full stocking –
when did they come?”

[IP: Resolution]

 

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Comments

Submitted by D G Moody on

I always thought Christmas was just for children, but later on I got the magic - lovely poem Rhiannon

Dougie Moody

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you. It's nice that we can combine the spiritual delight with family fun and celebration! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

on the face of it, it is quite a frightening thought isn't it? A strange man is going to break into your house and come into your bedroom and leave you something. I was talking about it to my youngest son recently and he said he didn't completely believe it quite early on, but still enjoyed the delight of the magic

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Yes, my children liked to have the pretend, and excitement fun, and the collection of little things in a stocking/bag. I don't suppose those young think of the 'starnger' aspect especially as he's supposed to be so perfect and jolly! But I know a number who have felt unsettled about being taught it as truth, maybe partly because the/I helt a bit stupid for having been gullible! Rhianno

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you for the cherries! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by airyfairy on

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Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Oh, thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed! Especially as it was you I think chose the IP, and at first I thought I didn't have any idea for that and then I remembered watching a day or two ago my grandchild watching a 'Topsy and Tim' episode where they want to stay awake for the so-called'Tooth Fairy', and so I started thinking from that …! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Turlough on

I’ll put a knobbly lorry under me in bed …

An effective measure but maybe a bit drastic. I'd have probably gone for a couple of bits of Lego.

Nice poem Rhiannon... entertaining and amusing.

Turlough

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks, glad you enjoyed! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on

Congratulations Rhiannon!

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thanks very much! Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Di_Hard on

Lovely :0) The thought of going to sleep listing all the ways of staying awake, and the happy surprise from not succeeding, not yet being grown up :0)

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Glad it struck a realistic and funny chord! Thank you. Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Our Father Chrismas was exactly the same,  tree, and pillow cases by the bed for the presents. No sleep! My late father made a really big thing of christmas I miss those days. What I find suprising is how close the custams are with you so very far away  & Nolan

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Christmas time, both the spiritual celebrations and the present-giving and special meal do draw families together and help to calm frictions, hopefully! I suppose the customs associated with Christmas came with the settlers migrating from England, Holland and other parts of Europe? Rhiannon

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Maybe, but I would say much rather films radio and television. Copy-cats everywhere. It is incredible in general what influence America has on society already just by itself.

See you &

 

Submitted by Nolan on

Our Father Chrismas was exactly the same,  tree, and pillow cases by the bed for the presents. No sleep! My late father made a really big thing of christmas I miss those days. What I find suprising is how close the custams are with you so very far away  & Nolan

 

Submitted by marandina on

You have captured the magic of Christmas Eve so well. How as young children, we would intend to stay awake and then, next thing, presents have arrived. Very lovely indeed, Rhiannon. Paul

 

Submitted by Rhiannonw on

Thank you, Paul. I could imagine the attempts to stay awake … Rhiannon