A Dying Request
By mcscraic
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A Dying Request
By Paul McCann
I heard the shot and turned around The old man fell down on the ground . I ran over to where he fell. His soul bound for heaven or hell . His open wound profusely bled . I looked at him and softly said , “ Is there anything I can do.” “Listen to what I’m telling you.” I gently lifted up his head, And listened to the things he said . “I have a bullet in my gut , and I know my number is up” On to each of his words I clung “I am old but you are still young, and my house needs urgent repairs. Can you fix the floorboards and stairs, The walls could do with a soundproof And replace those tiles on the roof. Can you finish that concrete edge , Around the rose bed and the hedge . I’ve wanted to do that for years. ” My eyes held back a well of tears, “Sure old man I’ll do that for you ” His time to go was drawing near . Then I felt his breath disappear. |
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There we see
There we see how strong man's will to live is, even to the point of completely irrational. I think for myself as last request read Psalm23, and play VM "northern muse" and "dweller on the threshold".
Good! & Nolan
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I would like a solid
I would like a solid breakfast thanks. Bacon and two eggs fried sunnyside up, an extra slice of toast please, fried tomato and onion, and an extra glass fresh orange juice. Keep the change.
The hearty man ate a doomed breakfast! Tom Brown
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