Andalucian Sunrise
By Ewan
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Every morning there’s a donkey serenade:
Arri Burro and his Battered Trombone Orchestra
play-in the sunrise long before Chantecleer’s
Andalucian cousin crows cock-a-hoop at his harem
still sleepy over eggs soon-to-be over-easy
if I make it out of bed to the kitchen
before it’s too hot to breathe, never mind eat.
And I don’t complain,
as the light comes.
Every flower has its petals burgeoning:
any poppy and its purple thistle neighbours
attracts the flying blooms that are butterflies,
colourful accents kiss-chasing in pairs over meadows
more lovely for the quietness of too-soon busy roads
and I make it out the door into sunlight
because it’s too good to miss - any of this.
And I won’t yet leave
Andalucia.
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You've caught so much there,
You've caught so much there, especially that 3rd stanza. Really felt a gift of a glimpse and feel of the scene. Thanks! Rhiannon
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Andalucia brought to life - I
Andalucia brought to life - I can taste the hot sun arising to the day. Bravo Ewan.
Dougie Moody
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I love the movement in this-
I love the movement in this- starting with the crowing rooster waking, I assume, the farmer, and moving into the thankfulness for the morning and the bountiful beauty all around. It makes wish to be in Andalucia too.
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Partiularly loved
Partiularly loved "butterflies,
colourful accents kiss-chasing in pairs over meadows
more lovely for the quietness"
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