Practical Language

By lenchenelf

Thu, 29 Jan 2009

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3 comments

I could write of your lips
In eloquent terms
Ending in ‘ous’ or ‘ly’

I’d much rather kiss them
With passion that burns
And talk about us and we

Comments

Great stuff mate. Short but

Permalink Submitted by threeleafshamrock on Fri, 2009-01-30 01:35

Great stuff mate. Short but effective as my missus told me affectionately after our 7th was born ;) Chris

Thanks for reading Nathan,

Permalink Submitted by lenchenelf on Fri, 2009-01-30 17:28

Thanks for reading Nathan, you're very kind :-) Yes Chris, I wrote this in t'other halfs voice, well spotted ! :-) FTSE...sending a wing-ed messenger of affection, one of my youngest sons "Smoots" :-) Thanks Chelsey, much appreciated atb L

Very neat little poem,

Permalink Submitted by chelseyflood on Fri, 2009-01-30 11:56

Very neat little poem, simple but effective.