The Greatest Gift
By cassiopeia
Sat, 31 Jan 2009
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To start with nothing
Thoughts
Ideas
A swirling mass within your mind
But how to take that vivid storm
And let it dance before your eyes
Set it free to find its way
Fly
Embrace
Engulf your world
Ignite your fire
Let loose the deepest heart’s desire
A work of art
A masterpiece
Sculpted
Written
Painted new
The greatest gift
Is to create.
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Short, simple, direct - this
Permalink Submitted by Geoff Smith on
Short, simple, direct - this is a pretty piece indeed. I also like the way that the pace of it picks up before slowing to allow for a direct conclusion.
Really nice work
JM
Thanks for reading. I am grateful for your time.
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