A Sliver of Silver
By windowguy
Tue, 24 Feb 2009
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Gently falling from
The midnight sky
A sliver of silver
Dropped into my palm;
It began to slowly melt
Into a little silver pool
Caressing
Each fold,
Each crease;
Quiescent in quietude,
Coalescing
With the warmth
Of my hand;
There it rested.
A smile
Lit up my face
In gratitude
For this small
Gift of the Moon.
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Oh, just lovely imagery! The
Oh, just lovely imagery! The vocabulary really makes soundscapes in the mind as you read...
However, I really think the capitals at the start of the lines interrupt the 'scattered flow' effect you are going for...dare you remove them?
J x
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Lovely; beautiful
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Lovely; beautiful imagery!
Chris ;)
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