BLEEDING OBVIOUS - 30 Word IP

By Dynamaso

Thu, 02 Apr 2009
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You stained the rug
while bleeding obvious.
I tried to staunch
your wounded pride;
bandage your ego.
As much as it hurts
you’ll know not to
point it out again.

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Submitted by threeleafshamrock on
You are really into this short stuff mate and it obviously suits you; very good, class piece again! Chris

Submitted by Dynamaso on
Chris, thanks again for reading and enjoying, my friend. Your support means a lot to me.