I wish
By LaurenUndead
Wed, 14 Oct 2009
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Im the girl who tries to smile when you are sad,
Im the girl whos sholder you need whenever you cry,
Im the girl who makes you laugh when your so down,
But im the girl who cries the whole night through,
Cause I no that I am never gonna be with you
I watch you everytime that girl breaks your heart,
I watch you make the same mistakes over again,
I watch you smile and just accept her back,
But you never seem to understand,
All they ever do is bring you down.
I wish I could have the courage to tell you,
I wish I could open up my heart,
I wish I could take you in my arms and hold you,
But I should know that wishes never come true,
Cause I just wish that I could be with you.
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i agree with nathan...this
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i agree with nathan...this is a good piece filled with longing, gentle affection and bits of anger and despair. however, the grammatical errors are distracting and easily fixed. take the time, it's well worth it!
jason
jason
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