little cat
By darkoe2lh2k
Tue, 10 Aug 2010
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Little cat why do you weep
Never smile and never sleep
Are you still trapped inside that box
Dressed so poorly where are your socks
Curled up your body into a ball
Rocking slowly," watch you'll fall"
You dont deserve the guilt you hold
Its not your fault your pure as gold
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This is lovely, 'dont'
This is lovely, 'dont' should be don't and the last 'your' I think is you're, minor things in a very nice poem.
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