Heart sweet
By span
Tue, 10 Aug 2010
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Heart sweet
I knew you would do this,
but I sealed my instinct and kept it in hope kitchens.
When the rain fell on the tent,
I comma curled and let my stupid heart fix.
I dreamt we walked bridle paths touching torsos,
let friends take photos
fucked like it meant something.
But you knew only deadlines and distance.
Click waking your eyes tupperware, you feel guilty
and try explaining I made no promises. Heart sweet.
Of course, lean back – let me
Salt this.
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Some very interesting
Some very interesting wordplay here, I really liked it, but the 'fucked' rang badly in amongst the rest, it felt so unnecessary and awkward.
J x
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