Late winter
By Louise178
Tue, 18 Jan 2011
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9 comments
Heavy is my world
slowly it spins and turns
grudgingly on tilted axis
Strong determined the winds
that blow among the stars
scattering in panic
frightened whispy clouds
Forceful is the rain
drenching trees, the leaves
mulching up the land
Cold dark is my mind
in this slowly
turning winter world.
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perfectly captured bleakness
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perfectly captured bleakness
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Yes you've said what I would
Yes you've said what I would like to say but can't!
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bleak is not a bad quality
bleak is not a bad quality in this poem.. great job!
cheers.
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Sorry for my late
Sorry for my late commenting, extremely haunting poem, dark and beautiful :)
Beeme xx
k.
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