Missing you

By adora

Wed, 27 Jul 2011
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My thoughts meander like the river that I observe, winding winding away from here. No matter how far I go or how richly my mind captures you microscopically and arranges you in my field of vision; no matter how much I endear to me the memories that are so well kept that it takes a moment to unleash them and watch them lay before me dog eared and scarred from abuse. No matter that I get to hear your voice translated via waves carried through machines. Sometimes it cascades over me. Sometimes I am glazed over with emotion. Other times I am numbed. Everyday I watch the river unchanging like my thoughts because of the distance between my eyes and yours.

Certificate U
Story
Journeys never taken
Love

Comments

Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
Hi adora, you describe so much emotion in this story, it's amazing how the mind can take you to another place. I really enjoyed reading. Jenny.

 

Submitted by adora on
Thank you Jennifer for the wonderful comment.
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Submitted by awsamy on
a beautiful poem describes how i feel when im away from my bf perfectly, a great read :)

Submitted by adora on
That is exactly what I was going for awsamy! Glad you enjoyed it.
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Submitted by maggyvaneijk on
such a short piece yet it's absolutely filled with emotion and it flows just like the river you describe. This bit struck me the most: dog eared and scarred from abuse. I'd love to read more.

 

Submitted by adora on
Thanks Maggy!I really appreciate the comment. I wish that there was any more of it to read but that is all I could manage in trying to capture missing someone very dear to me.
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