Are You the Wind?
By JoseHdz
Tue, 30 Aug 2011
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So, this is how the mind expands: it pulsates
On the tips of pens - The ink flows to the
Page like a violet rain, falling calmly
To an ocean’s lap. The rhythm resonates
Inside the reader’s gut (causing
Tender COMBUSTION) like hot
Whiskey and the smell of flesh. At night,
The image casts its prism light
Inside the caverns of the vagrant mind;
Alive, the poem shows a hidden,
Existential path to neon flowers
Blooming in a pool of grass.
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I am the wind. What's it to
Permalink Submitted by johngammyleg on
I am the wind. What's it to you?
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"(causing
"(causing tender
COMBUSTION)"
best line in the piece... I am an admirer of minimalism because frankly I am not good at it lol Much enjoyed this :)
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Yes, minimalism is good but
Yes, minimalism is good but only in certain hands. You definitely have the write (sic) hands.
barryj1
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I really enjoyed, it flows
I really enjoyed, it flows beautifully.
Beeme xx
k.
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