LOST MOTHER
By Indrani Ananda
Mon, 02 Jan 2012
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Oh that a bright mind would never die,
Or a fair spirit never fly;
Love cannot keep you here, nor Earth retain;
And Time knows not how to heal a memory's pain.
Oh that a brave Soul could never weep,
Or a dear heart forever sleep;
Prayer cannot hold you here as you move on .....
Or tell the eternal secret: where you've gone.
Oh does a spirit-form in truth grow old
When it's borne high on wings of gold?
Words cannot lock you here, nor kinship tie;
And Time is the cruel one who let you die.
Oh when a torn heart will never mend,
Or a dark night not ever end;
Years will not chase you there, nor eons roll;
And Time cannot bind you here
But free your Soul.
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I cannot quote a single
Permalink Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on
I cannot quote a single stanza which stands apart from the others, they are all equally beautiful, except to say that the first stanza, for me, particularly struck a chord.
Tina
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Indrani, superbly crafted,
Indrani, superbly crafted, unforced rhyme, lilting rhythm, sentiment expressed unsentimentally. Well done you thoroughly deserve those cherries.
P.S. I was impressed by your forum observation recently by the way ;)
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I like this a lot. Is this
I like this a lot.
Is this one of those rhyming poems with meter you mentioned that doesn't get the cherries on this site? :-)
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