As the song says, 'You are not alone' ..

By denni1

Fri, 24 Aug 2012
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Imagine it's your birthday with no calls, or cards or gifts.
Cos you ain't got no family to plant one on your lips.
It must be so heartbreaking when the posti marches by.
But remember you got your good looks, the mirror, it don't lie ..

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Submitted by Sooz006 on
Aw, bless him/ her. But remember you got your good looks, the mirror it don't lie ... I stumbled just slightly on the metre of this line. however, remember you still got your looks, works fine. 9 syllables to 8 This reminds me of the verse inside a Birthday card. I believe there's good money in it and you'd be perfect for it because they are all about the lit in the metre.

 

Submitted by denni1 on
I wish l knew what you mean, because l really do appreciate your interest. Is there any way to talk through what you mean, if you know what l mean !! ?? Denise xx