Sliding Doors (I.P.)
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By Silver Spun Sand
Sun, 02 Jun 2013
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'Bet she’s gagging
for it,’ he says,
inside his head.
‘Is that a Rolex Oyster
on his wrist? No...
couldn't be,’ she muses.
'Great t-shirt
she's nearly wearing;
she'd be dynamite
in bed!'
‘Expect he’s married...
all the best ones are.
Cute glasses, though;
intellectual, that’s a cert.’
He imagines groping,
she's supposing
he's proposing.
‘Mind the gap...It’s
wider than you think.
Doors closing.’
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Very clever in making an
Very clever in making an astute observation in few words with a nice shot of humour. Good stuff!
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A clever poem Tina. What
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
A clever poem Tina.
What caught my eye, was the way you turned
observation into a poem, very skilful.
Jenny.
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Hi Tina :) I its a great
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Hi Tina :) I its a great poem and well thought out with a fun twist. Well Done.
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing :)
Keep Smiling
Keep Writing xxx
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