Fences

By seafret

Sat, 28 Sep 2013
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While the birds played at being planes
The planes played at being birds

While the girls played at being brides
The brides played at being girls

Freedom constrained
Freedom regained

 

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Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Less is often more, as here, seafret;-)

Tina

 

Submitted by seafret on

Thanks, Tina. Yup short and snappy sometimes the only way to go!

 

Submitted by hudsonmoon on

I love the short and sweet of it, seafret.

 

Submitted by Bee on

Like this

Bee

Submitted by seafret on

Thank you, hudsonmoon and Bee. 

 

Submitted by denni1 on

In Scotland, the birds (burds) are the girls !! Just a useless piece of information ..