Ménage à trois

By luigi_pagano

Sat, 26 Oct 2013
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12 comments
 

An unconventional life.

It might never happen
he said with a laugh.
How wrong he was,
it already had!
She had packed her bags
and walked out.
She had had enough,
she said.
Of living in sin.
I ask you.
Inconsiderate or what?
Do I look worried?
I don’t care a jot
and carry on living
in perfect harmony
with her twin.

© Luigi Pagano 2013
 

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Comments

Submitted by VeraClark on

Ouch! Enjoyed this.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Do I hear a painful cry, Vera? It can't have been that bad if you enjoyed it. wink

 

Submitted by Silver Spun Sand on

Ouch indeed, Luigi.  

Clever stuff, as ever.

Tina xxx

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Ouch indeed? Et tu Brute? Was it below the belt, Tina? I suppose it was, in a manner of speaking.

Luigi xxx

 

Submitted by Bee on

This made me smile. 

Enjoyed.

Bee

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

That's the ticket Bee. There's nothing more satisfying than making people smile.

Best, Luigi.

 

Submitted by Luke Neima on

Ooof what a turn! Didn't see it coming, Luigi. 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Always expect the unexpected, Luke, especially from me.

Cheers, Luigi.

 

Submitted by VeraClark on

Nothing I love more than a dash of shock and a bootful of below the belt. surprise

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Cheers Vera. You don't have to convince me, I am a convert to your work.

Luigi cool

 

Submitted by scratch on

Mad, funny and pacy Luigi.  Well done with this.

 

Submitted by luigi_pagano on

Thanks scratch. I have been known to have my crazy moments. wink