A feeling

By rachel1712

Sat, 28 Jun 2014
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A feeling
Look into my eyes and you'll see fear,
Look into my heart and you'll see pain,
Touch my skin and you'll feel ice,
Look into my soul and you'll see emptiness.

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Submitted by Bee on

Really sad, this. At the end, I was hoping there woud be something else - a reason? Hope? I don't know, it just feels a little unfinished. Nice, though.

Best wishes,

Bee

Submitted by rachel1712 on

Thank you Bee, i will do an improved version of this

 thank you Rachel