drowning

By rachel1712

Tue, 01 Jul 2014
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I am drowning in a sea of sorrow,
the current dragging me down to the abyss,
I scream as the water fills my lungs,
got not air left to breathe,
the pressure crushing me,
sinking deeper into the depths,
lost forever in the frozen void 

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Submitted by prettyrose on

smileyHi Rachel1712. I hope your well.

I liked this alot, because it says alot in such a short few lines, and I could imagine being there and feeling the emotions you wrote with such passion and thought. Well Done

 

Take Care

smiley Keep Smiling

Keep Writing xxx