Let’s Build An Ark

By well-wisher

Tue, 30 Sep 2014
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1.

 

Can’t you feel

the raindrops falling;

the flood is real

and Nature’s calling.

 

2.

 

Can’t you see

the danger brewing

unless we

change what we’re doing.

 

Chorus:

 

Let’s build an Ark;

build it together

because the dark

and stormy weather

is heading this way.

Let’s build it today.

 

3.

 

Can’t you tell

the bell is tolling

for you as well

but you’re just strolling.

 

4.

 

Can’t you hear

the distant thunder;

clouds over there

you will be under.

 

Chorus:

 

Let’s build an Ark;

build it together

because the dark

and stormy weather

is heading this way.

Let’s build it today.

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Submitted by Broamalia on

There is a strong melody running through this piece, in verse and chorus. I was able to sing it to a riffed melody and wasn't stopped by and awkward syllables or clashing consonants, so well done.

The last line of the third and fourth verses seem like you may have stretched for the rhyme at the cost of finding a more impact full word... consider different, looser types of rhyme, possibly? But you're just strolling could be 'the time you're holding', or 'tragedy unfolding', or 'the flesh is molding'...
Just a thought. Thanks!