Not A Sonnet: Of Moths And Metaphors


By Old Jack Is Back
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It is the one thing we have in common:
that we breathe the world’s air, then we do not.
To write one line about something so trite
is a waste of paper. The rain forest
will bless me when I do not trouble you
with such banality. So I shall spend
my days sparing you the grief of reading
my shallow thoughts about mortality.
If I wield a pen, it will be to sign
my name while I remember it. Today
is a good day to live and not to wring
all meaning from the sunrise, all beauty
from the moon. The stars are distant candles,
but I resist all metaphors of moths.
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Beautiful. Made my eyes well
Beautiful. Made my eyes well up.
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not a sonnet of moths, but
not a sonnet of moths, but something deeper about the day!
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Witty with a touch of wry
Witty with a touch of wry humour. Pointing out the futility and waste of paper writing, yet still doing so is clever. I liked the irony.
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This is our poem of the month
This is our poem of the month for June. Well done!
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This is so beautiful but
This is so beautiful but clever too. I loved all of this but particularly the last line. Clever!
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