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By minerproblem
Mon, 06 Jul 2015
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She screamed,
"Go away!"
To her demons.
They mocked her.
Ignored her.
Her voice got weaker and weaker.
"... go away... please..."
They laughed at her.
She tried to get out of that pit.
But she was surrounded.
There was no escape.
And she knew it.
So she gave in...
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I liked this. If it were mine
I liked this. If it were mine, I'd omit the last line and leave the outcome to the readers imagination. Just a thought. But I thought it was really good.
Bee
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