Black Saturn Haiku Set
By seannelson
Thu, 18 Feb 2016
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"The air is full of spirits. The Best serve Eros" - Pythagoras
At 'the Cat Scratch club,'
'ladies and gentlemen' gather
with fur-adorned 'subs'
Casper's friendly ghost
wanders about, followed by
three fit blonde bomb-shells
But on stage, one sees
the real stars: pearls, silk, and steel:
sweet shock of 'the real'
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Three nicely put together
Three nicely put together senryu, conjuring great images.
Bee
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