Pond life
By Parson Thru
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Sweetness couldn’t find
a scene more innocent
than summer lily-pads,
patronised by dragonflies
and fumbling bumblebees
Picture-postcard skies
shimmer on the surface,
allaying all suspicion
of an algae-cloistered murk
But down among the roots
and sucking mud,
a multitude of plots evolve
in all their sordid machinations
It requires but a stick
of modest reach
to penetrate the artifice
and air the stench
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Oh, you have caught the
Oh, you have caught the beauty and the concealed stench so well and neatly here! A multitude of plots among the roots, don't want to let them out! Rhiannon
I got searching for something I did once when the IP was Look beneath the surface and did something as this sort of metaphor. Found it in the end
https://www.abctales.com/story/rhiannonw/mixed-motives-mixed-metaphors
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