Vulnerable
By Yutka
Tue, 22 Jan 2019
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Everything is vulnerable at nightfall.
All rooms in the empty house
are blurred by the penetrating
darkness.
Inside the bedroom the bed
Is still disentangled. No one
has slept there since he was found
naked, shrouded, no more
breathing.
No more efforts to get up, dress,
making coffee
arm himself with the usual words
to greet the day,
to see the light
how it is creeping
under the furtive rays of the early sun
touching an empty bed
unmade, unowned
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Hi Yutka,
Permalink Submitted by hilary west on
Hi Yutka,
I like the desolation of this and the sense of loss. Nice sense of broken atmosphere !
Hilary
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A haunting poem that leads
Permalink Submitted by skinner_jennifer on
A haunting poem that leads with a sense of dissolution and the finality of grieving.
Well written.
Jenny.
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