Like music
By stevepoet
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The sun is a heart
beating light into
the coldness of space.
And this heart is a
small, ugly dog
running joyfully
through the bright spring air,
licking the faces
of tutting houses,
waiting until you
walk back through the door.
And this dog is a star
that you can just see,
sharing its tiny
pulses of light in
a sea of others.
And this star is a shoe
tapping messages
on a parquet floor
in unsubtle notes.
And this shoe is a pen
walking a poem
through the streets of your
London on paper
borrowed from notebooks
full of your laughing.
And this pen is a record
with the best music
that you sometimes dance
to, sometimes with me.
And we are like planets
in orbit around
a sun like a heart,
like an ugly dog,
like a star, like a shoe,
like a pen, like a
record, like music.
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Really nice rhythm to this,
Really nice rhythm to this, and the imagery works well. I particularly liked the image of the heart like an overexcited dog, setting the tone so well for what is to follow.
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