A Man Riding the Tube Train
By Jane Hyphen
- 1903 reads
A man riding the tube train
Sitting in the sallow grease of his day
His dreams in his father’s briefcase
Dropping the filings of his doubts
Into a pile beneath his shell like nacre
Layers, he hopes one day to find a pearl
Doors Opening - tentacles spill on the platform
Her fingers grip the pole
Our man, his pupils dart like sailfish
She’s the same age as his daughter
But her heels are higher, sharper
Pierce him as her flesh calves bulge
The dead-eyed crocodilia
Sit in rancid raincoat rows
Thinking of their carrion tallies
As thin-sliced spruce old ladies
Drown the hermetic cries
Of the dead cats in their purses
Doors Closing - Back to the map of veins
He learned in faded years from a faded box
And tatty paper scraps, a game
Waiting for the heave and hoe
His hands slide the coarse azure stubble
The upholstery, a swelling microbial footprint
Every day the same for stinking miles
Bodies change, the faceless entities the same
Dermis fused, frontiers dissolve yet they’re
As unconnected as the pavement walkers
Every mind a planet sealed away
Each carriage is a cosmos
Grey matters peruse pink sheets
Smooth fat fingers separate the pages
Spit-licked lubricant pathogenic
The train - a flesh terrine slow cooked
Studded with bright exotic berries
And sly meat streaks of fat
His shiny shoes alight, reflect the arch
The tiles which hold the echoes
As a hot wind blows through
The dust of the freight sirocco
Burns the script of his corporate throat
Soon he'll see green leaves and birds
And sleep in his familiar hemisphere
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Oh Jane WOW
Oh Jane WOW
I just read this, can't convey how brilliant sufficiently as don't have time, but WOW
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This has so many sublime
This has so many sublime lines, imagery and metaphor. Such an excellent piece of writing.
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I first read this and it swam
I first read this and it swam before my eyes a bit so thought I'd come back later. Very glad I did - I'd like to echo Di's comment, because it really is! Some fabulous lines in this poem:
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