Is this going to make a return? I liked either having new writers pointed out to me, or ones I'd read before recognized. Any chance it might have a comeback? Pretty please?

Hi everyone, I'm new to ABC tales and new to writing as well. I've done one very short piece so far, and you can find it here:

http://www.abctales.com/node/545839

I'd really appreciate any feedback you guys have, as I'm looking to improve myself as a writer. English was never my best subject at school so you'll have to forgive the poor grammar, but it will improve with time, I'm sure.

I was just doing a bit of research for something I'm writing, and I discovered that if I wanted to travel from Aberystwyth to Swansea today after 8pm, it would take nearly 11 hours...

http://www.thetrainline.com/Time_Table/QTT_Display_Timetable.asp

!?!!?!!?!?!!?!?!?!? WHAT ?!?!!?!?!?!?!!!!?!!

Just thought I'd share that...

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I like this - because it's very very clear as to what it's trying to say:

http://www.abctales.com/story/chant/the-hyenas

...and it says it very well.

But is poetry meant to be this transparent?