Simplicity Redeemed

By aardvark1500

Wed, 17 Dec 2008
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What's in a kiss, a simple kiss,
Other than a world of bliss,
Opened at that heavenly hour,
Into the lovers' tumbling tower,

To try and love an endless soul,
Fills and torments, makes us whole,
Then the time when love lacks lust,
Surely followed, simply must,

To sleep and run, to run and stay,
In hope that terror turned away,
But why do lovers try to care,
About those in the dark loveless lair,

For are they caught in endless bliss,
Inspired by the simple kiss?

S

Certificate PG
Poem
Sea of Poetic Thoughts
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Comments

Submitted by clearing my head on
redeemed really? between you and my horoscope i know exactly what is going on. be simple. i don't get the whole cryptic thing! i can read that however i want, and what i want is probably not what you want. i still think it's only your second best poem.

Submitted by simplyhere on
This will sound weird: but i didnt know you could write such meaning pieces. What i mean to say is i know you are an excellent writer but this... assuming who the 'S'is, is is just well i am lost for words. A fantastic poem.

Submitted by clearing my head on
i love you, you are everything and you are forever. it's just that forever is a long time. forever will have to start when i say so. but i wouldn't blame you for even hating me or moving on without me. it would serve me right for being so selfish. but that's me isn't it. every time i read this it gets better and you wouldn't believe how often i read it.