a dozen roses

By Deliberately Evolving

Sun, 14 Feb 2016
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1. red -
a symbol for our passion and love.
2. White 
for your youthful vigour and charm.
3. Pink -
my appreciation of your happiness.
4. Light pink -
my admiration of all your sweetness.
5. Yellow -
the joy and the friendship you give.
6. Yellow with red tip -
each day I continue falling in love.
7. Orange -
your enthusiasm and zest for life
8. Peach - 
my desire.
9. One more of those - because you just set me on fire.
10. Lavender -
it was love at first sight.
11. And another for your enchantment -
you have me in constant delight.
12. With an arrow through my heart,
that's so me and you - 
The impossible and unattainable, 
represented by 
Blue.
 
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Comments

Submitted by london_calling79 on

Very lovely. I enjoyed the building rhyme and the neat ending.

 

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks LC. It's a childish little poem but I'm glad you enjoyed it.

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.

Submitted by Bee on

Blue - appropriate finish. Colours well used. 

Bee

Submitted by Deliberately Ev... on

Thanks Bee

The beat of your heart is the mellifluent rhythm to my soul.