Don't Touch Me
By adbates
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He was one of those flowers
that only blooms
in the moon’s light
There were roses in his cheeks
His smile took me back
to summer days by the ocean
To making flower crowns
in my aunt’s garden
There was so much to see
and I recorded every single detail
in extensive journals
The way he closed by day
How frost seemed to collect
on his lashes
and he was only surviving
He’d immediately close himself
at the impending threat
of his petals
being caressed
I, myself, grew thorns and became unruly
A weed that wraps around
every beautiful thing
trying to claim it as my own
He hated the feeling of choking
I coiled myself around him anyways
Knowing it must hurt
but not how much
He stopped blooming
And I became poisonous
So don’t touch me
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Wow, gorgeous metaphores
Wow, gorgeous metaphores running through the veins of this one.
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Like the association
Like the association technique between characters and flowers. A sweet way of making sweets , but of course never forget the note of sadness at the end.
Like it!
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Love the plant metaphors,
Love the plant metaphors, especially the flower that only blooms in the moon's light, beautiful.
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It is beautiful and
It is beautiful and emotionally intense as well. Loved this.
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