Untitled #85

By adora

Tue, 20 Jul 2010
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The second dawn breaks on this reign. Calamity worn out had laid down her sword on the bloodied battlefield and the memory of war shimmers like a sundown happening at dawn on a vast lake.

The mingling of the tears of regret and the rippling truth causing a surprisingly beautiful effect as the graying sadness and the yellowing regret that cling onto the branches of past mistakes are swayed each time she breathes.

Something appears fleetingly at the corner of her lips.

She touches her now stainless face as if doubting her own existence and begins to sweep away at the fallen leaves under the morning sun.

Certificate U
Story
Journeys never taken
Love

Comments

Submitted by h jenkins on
I've had a look at some of your work and the pieces in the 'journeys never taken' set are the ones that I like most. I wouldn't claim to understand all that you're trying to get over but I do like the atmosphere of that set. They have a magical and/or ancient feel to them - no that's not right, perhaps it's more like 'fantastic' in the original sense of the word. I think you would do well to expand on some of them and perhaps see where they take you. Helvigo Jenkins PS Great name by the way.

Helvigo Jenkins

Submitted by adora on
Thank you, they are for the most part incomplete. I do ejoy working on pieces with a lot of promise, its just that I tend to lose the whole plot and end up imagining a lot more stuff than I should have. I basically just clean up my first drafts. Watch this space though, I will take a stab at it. Gloria
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