Retirement options for tube trains, #7, Foulness Island
By alexwritings
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The mud bubbles
beneath the couplings
on an Autumn ebb-tide
as the North Sea rolls out
flat and silver
like virgin tin foil.
In fact, this coach in sinking:
the algae-d sleepers
shouldering the weight
of the District Line chassis
are tilting into the creek,
and the double set of doors
(part-open)
are oozing in water
glazed with the marble-like
scum of cockle spores.
On the floor is a sleeping bag,
discoloured and mottled
like dead flesh. Not a
tramp’s, but a retired architect’s,
who recently lost his wife,
and spent an equinox out here
with the lonely reeds
willing her face in the green flash
that, legend has it,
accompanies the sun’s departure
under the horizon’s guillotine,
while the wind turbines
obey the air, huddled
in their whirring white battalions.
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Some
striking imagery here.
Do you mean "algæ-d" at line 8?
Your poem finishes very strongly with these lines.
"the sun’s departure
under the horizon’s guillotine,
while the wind turbines
obey the air, huddled
in their whirring white battalions."
Wonderful writing.
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this is a wonderful piece -
this is a wonderful piece - agree with noo about the pictures. well done!
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