please let me into tour heart

By alibali

Sat, 19 Feb 2011
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when i woke
a looked in your eyes
i could feel my emotions taking over
because i knew iwould not be hurt anymore
i want to say i love you but the would is full
off fogotton dreams

i fell in pain when i cant find love
in your heart
your world is full of new memories
and im not there
please lie and say you love me
because icant go on with out you
remember i gave you my heart
and now youve givin it back
how nothing fells the same
i want to keep my pain
i love you
only thats the same

ALIBALI

Certificate 15
Poem
my writing 2011 my new life starts here i draw a line between past and present
Love

Comments

Submitted by Highhat on
Hi Alibali An emotive poem. You may need to look at couple of typos- in the title par example. "feel" and not fell your and not tour (title) go over it a bit carefully before you publish. otherwise just keep on writing ;)Pia