this story brings to life the fears of being out on your own at night

By alibali

Fri, 25 Mar 2011
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im safe

i came out of the darkness
panic
an eco of a screem
a face in the shadow
a chance you might meet
there is someone at a window
envy
my heartbeat increaces
rain gives way to sleet
a faint sound of foot steeps
behind me
run
more panic
terrifide
theres someone across
the street
i catch my breath
im safe

Certificate 12
Story
my writing 2011 my new life starts here i draw a line between past and present
Horror

Comments

Submitted by Insertponceyfre... on
Hello Alibali - I think you've managed to convey a real sense of rising panic in this poem. One thing - you should try to run a spell check on all your pieces - it makes it much easier for the reader to concentrate on what you're trying to say