Abandoned Bones
By Amanda-Moo
Wed, 15 Oct 2008
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My skin is blue and icy cold.
You have me locked away.
I know if I try something bold
There will be Hell to pay.
I've been in here for far too long,
The pigments left my cheeks.
It could be that a day has gone,
Perhaps it has been weeks.
Silver tears frozen on my face,
Ashen breath creates a cloud.
The window shows a sunny space,
I am stuck inside this shroud.
You've forgotten all about me,
The dungeon's key will turn to rust.
I will die here if you let me,
Abandoned bones will gather dust.
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This is close to perfect! I
This is close to perfect! I loved the rhyming, it's smooth. I imagine a little girl crying in a dark basement, it chills me.
best regards,
yReNe
(^_^)
best regards,
yReNe
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