Anger inside

By andrew-evans

Sat, 19 Dec 2009
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It's so hard to imagine
a feeling stronger than love,
well there is one
and it overwhelms you,
in some cases you feel strong
in others, weak.

It's hard to get rid of this feeling
it plagues you,
rots away at your inside.
The feeling is anger
and i keep mine bottled inside,
but i'm not angry at others
i'm angry at myself
for never saying the things i want to
when i need to.

But there was one i was angry at,
so angry i did a stupid act,
then one day they asked
"why are you so angry"
So i told them,
your words leave their marks

Certificate U
Poem
The Dark Times
Miscellaneous

Comments

Submitted by shoe on
I like this poem, but I do think it's worth the effort to spell correctly, it actually detracts from the poem, do you have spellchecker?, (I depend on mine!) in written work it is important that you say what you mean or the whole point of the poem is lost.

 

Submitted by andrew-evans on
At the moment i lack a spellchecker as my ms word isn't working, once i get it back i shall spell check this

 

Submitted by shoe on
This reads much better, A very strong poem, and hard hitting last line!